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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 21, 2010 11:34:53 GMT -5
FINE ILL CHANGE DAT BIT IF IT MAKES U HAPPY
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 21, 2010 20:05:51 GMT -5
((you didn't change it??? or maybe somethings wrong w/ my computer but it looks the same))
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 22, 2010 13:41:43 GMT -5
(( i did change it the site just didn't save my post))
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 23, 2010 20:31:33 GMT -5
((OHHHHH ok:) ))
Eaglestar fainted. She just couldn't imagine Flare being good.
Suey hissed abruptly "Its a trick!" She shrieked, And took off running.
Roxy faltered. Just remember your part, She told herself. And then without warning, she gasped. "Suey's right! Run!" And she jumped off highrock and sped out the camp entrance. Tawnytail and frostclaw scampered aside so they wouldn't be hit by 100 pounds of fox.
My turn now..Milkeyes thought. Snappingjaw tensed his tail, Theres the signal. Then, as if rehearsed, ((which it was if you haven't figured out)) Milkeyes and Snappingjaw walked backwards and then srpinted, hurtling themselves of off highrock and into the tree's.
"Confused...?" Nutsplash asked (Ya...this is payback)
Moonfoot just managed to nod.
"Deal with it," And then, fast at lightning she jumped on Tigerstar's back, raking a claw down it. "1 will faint," She spat jumping off of Tigerstar. "And two will kill." She whirled around and clawed Eaglestar's belly. Twice.
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 24, 2010 8:02:45 GMT -5
Tigerstar yowled in pain and her vision went blurry but she wasn't going to let go of her sight, she had to fight. she closed her eyes and forced herself not to pass out, she had tried hard enough and she stayed conscious. "NO EAGLESTAR !!" she yowled as she saw nutsplash claw her belly twice.
Flare stood still in horror and she didnt know if she wanted to stay with these clan cats. but she had to stay for her son so she stood beside him her left paw slightly twitching. "son dont worry im never gonna leave you" she whispered to crowpaw.
"i know mother and i'll never leave you either" he hissed back to flare. he dashed to his mentors side and prodded her gently meowing, "its up to starclan to know if she lives we cant do anything for her"
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 24, 2010 21:46:35 GMT -5
Eaglestar's vision fizzed. She saw flare's black outlive vaguely, and then it vanished. Along with everything else.
She was alone is a forest. A full moon was shining brightly, and the woods smelled slightly like cherry. A small, chestnut-colored kit crept forward. "Eaglestar," She smiled.
Eaglestar gulped. "Fawnkit..."
"Nice to see you."
"...You too."
"How've you been?"
"...Um..ok I guess. I mean, its been kinda scary these last few minutes, but you know...I met star and he's my...friend now. So-"
"Ok enough chit chat," A new voice mewed sternly," Eaglestar. . "The voice faltered for a moment," Its great to see you."
"Same to you, but a saw you a second ago..."Eaglestar mewed, confused.
"I'm one of Tigerstar's two lives that she has lost. I'm here to help."
Eaglestar nodded.
"See normally, we would just take one of your lives and send you on your way but..."
"But?"
"Your lungs," Tigerstars's 8th life interrupted. "A small drop of death berry juice, no bigger than a mouse pupil, got in your lungs. And....this is bad. Very bad."
"So..what you're saying is...I'm going to loose all my lifes at once?" Eaglestar shrieked but her voice died down to a whisper at the word once.
"No," Fawnkit mewed," We're going to take 10 of your lives."
"I don't have ten lives!"
"Don't lie Eagle."
"I don't!"
"Yes you do! I don't know how you did it, but you did!"
"Fine I have 10 lives, but then I'll die!"
"No you DON'T" Fawnkit shrieked," I was there Eaglestar! I saw! You have 18 stupid lives!"
*******
Nutsplash smilled, "Go!"
And Milkeyes and Snappingjaw both jumped on Tigerstar, squashing her.
"Roxy!" The white fox skidded to a stop beside Tawnytail. "Die star cat!" And she clawed the small brown cat.
"Suey!
Lionecho shivered. He knew who she was coming for.
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 25, 2010 10:16:59 GMT -5
Tigerstar was squashed but she was strong and she pushed them both off of her angrily. "You will never beat us" she growled, she bit snappingjaws side and then milkeyes tail.
Flare leaped at nutsplash biting down on her shoulder and she scratched her twice. she then leapt at snappingjaw and bit his throat.
Crowpaw went to his mother and snappingjaw and he started to scratch him badly. "you will never beat us noblelion so just live with it" he snarled
Thunderstorm ran to his leaders side and helped her. he bit milkeyes back and held on tightly until he tasted blood. he let go abruptly as he was smashed to the ground.
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 26, 2010 16:10:42 GMT -5
Milkeyes turned to Flare and scratched her twice. TRAITOR!" She shrieked and then ran to see if Nutsplash was ok.
Meanwhile Snappingjaw turned to Crowpaw and scratched a long claw all the way from his head to his tail.
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Eaglestar flatered. "How...how did you know?"
Fawnkit snorted, "I gave you your third life, 'member?"
"Oh...right."
****
Tawnytail hissed abruptly as she felt a familiar tug in her gut, 'Not now!' She tholught. But it was too late, starclan whisked her away.
Moonfoot sighed unhappily as he saw his mate dissapear. "Alright starclan, I'm coming.." He mewed and was gone.
***
Slowly, Tawnytail, Moonfoot, Frostclaw, and Tansypaw appeared. Then a small white cat, followed by a black one came. And last, two large tabby toms padded forward.
"We're all here... "Fawnkit said.
"Fine, just take them already" Eaglestar spat.
Tawnytail came and touched noses with Eaglestar, "Be storng, my child." And her first life was gone.
Moonfoot came next. "You have used this life well..."He said, and eaglestar had 16 lives.
Frostclaw and tansypaw came up. "I love you sister, "Mewed Tansypaw. "Goodluck." Came Frostclaw's tart reply. And then they Each took one of Eaglestar's 16 remaining lives.
Then the black and white cat's came forward. "Goodbye, Eaglestar, "The white one, pumpkintail, said. The black one, Nightstep, ccrept forward."Best of luck.." And they brought eaglestar total to 12.
The two tabby toms came next. "I wish I could have been your mate, Eagle.." "As do I," said the other one, and winked.
Eaglestar blushed.
"Sorry, but we gotta take these 2 lives..."Siad the taller one, and they each took 1 of Eaglestar's lives.
Last, tiny little Fawnkit came. "Im sorry," whispered Eaglestar.
"I know," Fawnkit replied," But its ok. I only wish I could have gotten my warrior nae.
"If you did, it would be Fawnfur."
"How do you know?"
Eaglestar didn't reply. She didn't need to.
"Well when I leave you'll have 9 lives."
"I know."
"Okay, well goodbye, sister." And she dissapeared.
Lastly, a tiny red cat came forward.
"Who are you?" Eaglestar asked.
"I'm Lionecho's child."
"So...Tigerstar's your mother?"
"No." Eaglestar wanted to ask who was, but the look he gave her made her shut up.
"I'm Woodleaf. I'm a rogue, and.....well now you have 8 lives." And he was gone.
****
Red eyes:
Star, Sootpelt, Tigerstar, Goldenstar, Ivyheart, Crowpaw, Goldenwing, Flare.
Red claws:
Noblelion, Blazefire, Coalpaw, Roxy, Suey, Snappingjaw, Milkeyes, Darkfoot, and possibly. . .
Woodleaf?
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Post by xxxleahxxx on Sept 26, 2010 19:35:41 GMT -5
My, eagle, such a plot twister! xD And me and eagle made an agreement that we can roleplay with eachother's characters on this thread:)
Nutsplash shivered. It was cold... Her head swam and she fell over. Milkeye's face swam above her, then faded into blackness. Words echoed around in her skull. "Two will kill, two will kill, two will kill..." She focused all her energy, trying to remember what they meant. Two will kill. Kill? Whats kill? And two what? What two? Two killers?
She squeezed her eyes shut thinking.
Of course! Two claw marks!
But what did that have to do with....
Oh.
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh.
THATS why.
Flare had clawed her. TWICE.
Which meant....She was dead. Gone. Disappeared.
Nutsplash was no more.
**********
Woodleaf sighed, if only he could be down there fighting. Fighting...He impulsively unsheathed his claws. Fight...figth...fight.
"NO!" Someone screeched. Woofleaf turned around. "Tawnytail? Whats wrong?"
"Somethings wrong! We can't get back to the fight! We're stcuk in starclan, while they need our help!"
Woodleaf tilted his head to the side and padded forward. He placed a paw in the small puddle of water which transported cats to the real world. But he didn't move. "Well thats not good...."
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 27, 2010 11:58:30 GMT -5
Tigerstar looked around and saw most of stars warriors were down, including Flare and Crowpaw. she knew what to do but should she risk it?, she still had 7 lives but the death berry juice would still kill her. she felt strange as her teeth turned red, with death berry juice, but how wasn't it killing her? she didn't care. she leaped at Noblelion claws unsheathed and her red teeth bared, she landed on his back and she bit his neck and then scratched his sides.
Flare was down and she knew she was going to die, her eye sight was blurry and she couldn't breath probably.she saw her mother in her eyes and she was sure no other cat could see her. "mother is that really you?" she mewed in pain, "yes it really is my daughter" mewed Startail, Flares mother.
Crowpaw was down but he wasn't out, he was only scratched once and he was badly injured but he wouldn't give up. he saw his mother on the ground and she was dying, he dashed over to her. he knew he shouldn't cry as he knew that she would be going to a happy place. he rested his head on her body and he padded away.
Thunderstorm saw his leader fighting Noblelion but he knew that he shouldn't help her as she could take care of herself. "Noblelion just give up" he yowled proud of his leader fighting against Noblelion.
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Post by Star (Noblelion) on Sept 27, 2010 21:26:23 GMT -5
Noblelion tossed tigerstar off easily, then turned to his son, Star. Noblelion snarled and jumped at him. Star ducked and, using his favorite fighting move, rose up on his hind legs as Noblelion soared over his back. He pushed Noblelion to the ground and snarled, "I should have killed you when I had the chance!"
"Well, now you have your chance. So do it," Noblelion snarled back.
Star hesitated for a moment, unsure of whether or not he could kill his own father and former mentor.
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 28, 2010 12:21:47 GMT -5
"star, this isn't the time to be a gentle-cat, KILL HIM NOW!!" Tigerstar yowled. she ran at noblelion biting him on his shoulder and holding on with her life, then she started scratching him on his sides.
Crowpaw padded away from his mother's body. then he launched at the cat who killed his mother, Milkeyes. he bit her tail then scratched her face, he scratched her face all the way down to her jaw. he was so furious that he leapt at blazefire and bit his leg and held on then he scratched at his belly.
Flare looked at her mother and she knew what she was going to say. "my daughter, its time to come to starclan, dont be sad as you will be able to guide your son through dreams" mewed Startail. "im not sad mother im ready to go with you to starclan" Flare replied.
Thunderstorm leaped at coalpaw, he didn't want to do this but he had to. he stuck his claws into coalpaws sides and then he bit down on his neck. he held on tight and then let go for no reason. he didn't feel right, he didn't want to be in the fight, but he had to. so he pounced on coalpaws back again and scratched at his belly.
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 28, 2010 19:47:08 GMT -5
((Lol, milkeyes is a lion))
Milkeyes snarled and jumped on Crowpaw. She stomped hard on his back legs, and smiled slightly at the satisfying crunch from his legs. (Jeez, these cats are evil!)
Snapping jaw leaped at thunderstorm and ripped him off of Coalpaw. "Why don't you pick on someone your own size!" He snarled (HYPOCRITE xD), and clawed at his muzzle.
Suey froze and stared at STar. Not Noblelion, not noblelion anyone but Noblelion!
Eaglestar landed with a thump on the ground and saw Star fighting with Noblelion. Don't kill him, don't kill star, ANYONE but star she willed. She Saw star climb on top of Noblelion.
"KIll HIM" She though.
But he hesitated.
And in the second, that tiny little spot in time, everything seem to freeze in place.
Woodleefs red frame appeared in front of her. "Somethings gone wrong in starclan, and the star warriors can't get through."
"Then how are you here?"
"Well, we can get here..but we can't do anything." He reached out a paw to Eaglestar and then swatted at her. Eaglestar flinched, but nothing came. She look at her chest and saw his paw had gone through her.
"Well...thats weird."
"Yes it is."
"So is that I'll you were going to tell me?"
"No...theres one more thing. I quote the famous words of Shakespeare-"
"-Who?"
"It doesn't matter. Anyway, I quote 'Fair is foul and foul is fair'," She stood up," Good luck," then he winked and with a whoosh he was gone.
The world unfroze, and Eaglestar looked around at the fighting cats.
"Red eyes, to Tigercla territory- I have a pl-"
Suey spat in Eaglestar's face.
"What the-"
Eaglestar's mew was cut off as Suey leaped at her. Eaglestar hissed and clawed Suey's muzzle, sending her yowling in pain. Eaglestar lunged at suey and bit down hard on Suey's shoulder.
Suey's body stiffened and then relaxed underneath Eaglesstar's claws.
"You just made a big mistake," Suey screeched and flipped over so fast you would have missed it if you blinked. She jumped as high as she good and landed on Eaglestar's back and bit down on her ear. Eaglestar was speechless. How could a bite to the ear hurt that much?!
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 29, 2010 12:04:57 GMT -5
((im kinda confuzzled i dunno wht 2 put, lil help plz))
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 29, 2010 17:30:33 GMT -5
((i changed it a bit because ur right it was a bit confusing. Is tha betterrr?  )) |
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Post by Tigerstar on Sept 30, 2010 11:29:32 GMT -5
Tigerstar heard eaglestar but her voice was cut off, she saw suey on eaglestars back biting her ear, she didnt know wheter to help her or not. she ran to suey and launched herself at her and knocked her off of eaglestar. "should make it a bit easier for you, you werent moving" she meowed
Flare was dead and she left with her mother to starclan. ((thats all i can do for flare))
Crowpaw couldn't move as his legs were crushed he dragged himself over to a bush and he hid there. he saw his mother disappere to starclan. "goodbye mother" he whispered. he stayed as still as he could as he didnt want to be found.
Thunderstorms muzzle stung in pain and he was angry too. he leaped at snappingjaw and bit down on his spine. he held on and was sure he wouldn't be thrown off.
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Post by Eaglestar on Sept 30, 2010 19:00:41 GMT -5
Eaglestar grinned, "Thanks Tigerstar. This battles getting fun, yeah? (nutty cat)"
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Post by Star (Noblelion) on Sept 30, 2010 21:36:56 GMT -5
Star looked around anxiously before looking back at noblelion. He snarled, and bit down hard on his shoulder. He felt Noblelion's muscles tense and he whispered, "This is the last time I'll let you live, I don't EVER want to see you again!"
Star let his father get up. Noblelion snarled and meowed, "You haven't won yet. I'll be back again someday."
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Post by Tigerstar on Oct 3, 2010 7:52:33 GMT -5
((AHHHHHHHH I'VE RUN OUT OF IDEAS!!!!))
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Post by xxxleahxxx on Oct 4, 2010 19:49:02 GMT -5
((lol so is eagle i can tell cuz she never posts that short! and....so have I  )) |
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