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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 18, 2010 18:32:42 GMT -5
Name:Thunderstorm
Rank:warrior
Age:11 moons
Gender:tom
Personality:Thunderstorm is at times kind and gentle to his clan, but if in battle he is fierce, brave and loyal. He will always stand by his leader even if she has her temper going. The second part of his name "storm" was mainly given to him because he has a stormy temper. he has never had a mate and wishes he did.
Looks: He is a dark,grey almost black short-haired cat, with ice, blue eyes. He is large and musculer with a long tail. He has large paws with very sharp claws, he also has big, pointy ears with little white tufts on the end. he also has a hole in his left ear.
History: he was formally a rogue cat but he didnt want to be a rogue anymore, so he joined tigerclan. he has helped his sister, who is still a rogue cat, find a mate so she wouldnt be lonely. he misses his sister dearly but he will never leave tigerclan. he pays reguler visits to her to see if she was ok. but one night he went to go and see her when a large dog found him and attacked him and bit thunderstorms ear. he managed to get away to his sister and she healed him, so now he has a hole in his left ear.
Clan:tigerclan
Other: he has a hole in his ear
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 18, 2010 18:33:06 GMT -5
i will put a pic on a bit later cos i cant find one kk
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Post by Eaglestar on Aug 18, 2010 18:44:07 GMT -5
um tigerstar? You forgot his history silly!
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 19, 2010 6:35:36 GMT -5
OH DAMN
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 19, 2010 10:52:57 GMT -5
i hav done his history
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 19, 2010 12:39:37 GMT -5
if u want to see wht he looks like go to fan fiction and u should find "what thunderstorm looks like" and u will see a pic of a grey cat with ice blue eyes, hope you like it ;D
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Post by Star (Noblelion) on Aug 19, 2010 23:18:03 GMT -5
2 more in history
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 20, 2010 6:35:37 GMT -5
is tht better
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Post by Eaglestar on Aug 20, 2010 21:28:06 GMT -5
Tigerstar: I felt like I should tell you this. No offence, (pwease dont take offence :3 I'm just trying to help you out) but I think your characters need to be a litle bit different from eachother. A lot of the cats you create seem to be able to handle Tigerstar's temper, treated bad by twolegs, and/or mentored under tigerstar herself. They just seem to be..similar. Sorry if that offended you Eagle really ish sorry D: And if you have any tips for me, feel free to tell eagle!
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 21, 2010 7:55:11 GMT -5
no its ok eagle thts a gd point ill change it
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Post by Tigerstar on Aug 21, 2010 8:05:05 GMT -5
thx for the idea eagle im gonna ask you wht do ya think of it now is it better
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Post by Eaglestar on Aug 21, 2010 10:57:52 GMT -5
its awesome!
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Post by Star (Noblelion) on Sept 7, 2010 21:41:33 GMT -5
ACCEPTED
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